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Post by yoritomo on Sept 30, 2007 2:55:06 GMT -5
Need much more detail in everything. You should have about seven parahraphs in history since you want him to be a jounin and I would ask for about two-three paragraphs for personality (Also, from what you said here the only weapon he has is a kunai with a string on it, so you might want to add anything else you want, like perhaps regular kunai/shuriken?)
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Post by Yoko on Sept 30, 2007 20:19:59 GMT -5
post in here when you are done and we will check it over (yori has authority but it can vary)
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Post by yoritomo on Oct 3, 2007 18:56:27 GMT -5
You still didn't add detail to personality like I asked.
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