snow
Chunin
FIRE AT WILL, To late to say that.
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Post by snow on Oct 7, 2007 13:32:56 GMT -5
Name: Hiken Type: sword Description: Element: Ice Abilities: When the Hiken hits it target they will freeze after 5 minutes for a limit of 10 minutes during which Naomi may do whatever she wants to that person but whatever she does will not do as much damage as normal due to the layers of ice surrounding the target. If this sword is not with Naomi and someone else tries ot pick it up and take it they will not be able to touch it without their hand getting frost bite. The reason for this is because it was infused with Naomi's chakra when it was made and recognizes it. Name: Aqua torment or AT for short Type: Double sided spear. Description: Element: ICe Abilities: This weapon has no special abilities it is just a spear with 2 heads Naomi carries around on her back. Name: Arryan Type: Shield Description: Element: Ice Abilities: This shield can block any ice attacks and not only block but absorb them as well. Naomi keeps it at home till she knows she's going to need it. When the shield absorbs the ice it will get sent right back at the one who made it in the first place at the same stregnth as was used before. This shield cannot handle fire attacks very well at all.
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Post by Haihei on Oct 10, 2007 21:20:00 GMT -5
Okay, anything Ice related is pretty much property of the Maeno clan.
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snow
Chunin
FIRE AT WILL, To late to say that.
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Post by snow on Oct 10, 2007 21:26:36 GMT -5
My person is Maeno from her mothers side of the family and has a different last name cause her father isn't a Maeno. It explains it in the history
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Post by Haihei on Oct 10, 2007 21:33:51 GMT -5
Okay, I didn't wanna go into detail if you weren't Maeno.
Hiken: Being able to instantly freeze someone for ten minutes, it pretty much rediculous. Especially if it freezes them instantly. Just, maybe describe how quickly it freezes things for one. And explain how/why the blade can only be weilded by Naomi.
AT: It's fine. It's just a double ended spear. Nothing Special.
Arryan: First, the link doesn't show up on my screen. Not sure if it's broken or wrong, or it's just me. Moving on....What happens when the shield absorbs the ice? Does it just, go away? Or does it do something else with it? Elaborate on that.
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snow
Chunin
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Post by snow on Oct 10, 2007 21:37:42 GMT -5
the link is just yours
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Post by Haihei on Oct 10, 2007 21:38:36 GMT -5
Have you fixed everything else?
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snow
Chunin
FIRE AT WILL, To late to say that.
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Post by snow on Oct 10, 2007 21:40:20 GMT -5
yes now i have and as for the shield thing it says the attack gets sent back at the enimy
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Post by Haihei on Oct 10, 2007 21:41:59 GMT -5
APPROVED!
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