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Post by kawaiiblossom94 on Sept 1, 2007 13:58:18 GMT -5
Place of Origin: Konohagakure no Sato
Current location:three surviving members(one in Kirigakure, the other in Konohagakure, and the youngest member's location is unknown)
Name of kekkei genkai (bloodline limit): Yume
Description of kekkei genkai: changes the eye color into a different color, depending on the stage of activation. 1. if activated on the Dream state, user's eyes turn hazel 2. if activated on the Illusion state, user's eyes turn pale blue 3. if activated on the Death state, user's eyes turn onyx 4. if activated on the Divine state, user's eyes turn a creamy yellow 5. if activated on the Natural state, user's eyes turn dark green
*The dream state makes the opponent loose chakra the moment their eyes meet. *The Illusion state casts any genjutsu the user desires. *The death state is an ability that allows the user to launch a barrage of chakra balls that will leave the opponent in a near death state *The Divine state allow the user to use telekinetic abillities in combat * The Natural state allows the user to control nature.
History: The clan originated from a young woman with altered DNA by the name of Nadeshiko Reiko. This girl was experiented on by her own parents, but then escaped in the night. When she heard that her parents died, she was only 16 at the time. A man who was known as Shinji Namasaki took her under his wing and eventually, the man died. By the age of 22, Nadeshiko was in a relationship with Yoshi Souyatako. 3 years later, they had their first child and thus, the beginning of the clan.
Recently though, an invasion into the Reiko district was the destruction of the clan, with only 3 survivors. They go by the names of Yumi Reiko, Tobikuma Reiko, and Daisuke Reiko. Yumi is currently 7 years old, and her current location is unknown. Tobikuma is 13, and is living in Kirigakure with his foster family. Daisuke, who is 9 years old, lives in Konohagakure under care by the academy. It is said that Tobikuma and Daisuke have a very happy life, when Yumi is swearing on revenge for her lost clan.
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Post by Yoko on Sept 1, 2007 14:21:50 GMT -5
I don't really think I can approve this yet. There are five stages, in my thoughts that is a little much. Mostly because the eye gives off many different effects. Now if the dojutsu started out weak and works it way up to a grand effect that would be fine, but right now the first three do not have any compliment that I could see. I would say you could have the Divine state as the last form of the eye to use telekinsis. The Nature could be the fourth...and so on for whatever you can think of that you might want for the other three. Do remember though that I am giving a lot of leeway with this one.
I just want to make sure that the chakra drain for these eyes are high, because controling nature itself and all the elements imo would take a rather high amount of chakra to control.
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Post by kawaiiblossom94 on Sept 2, 2007 14:12:18 GMT -5
yeah, you're right, those are stages that people have to work up. the highest ones would be the Divine and Nature ones. the others also consume a lot of chakra, and here's why(i HAVE to learn to explain myself!!)
the dream state sort of has a chakra-sucking ability. this state consumes more chakra than it gains, but at the same time, leaving the opponent just as weak as the user.
the illusion state allows the user to create any genjutsu the user KNOWS. so basically, it can't be ANY jutsu.
the chakra balls from the death state are made up of fire and electricity. this one uses up too much chakra, so basically, is rarely used because of that. it is also the third state because of the fact that it doesn't KILL no matter how strong the chakra is.
the divine and nature states are the most difficult to control and obtain for that matter. the telekinetic powers can be used to control the enemy's action, but nothing to extreme. they can't be too far away, or else it'll basically not work. the nature state allows you to use any elements in the surrounding area, which can range from earth to lightning. but you can't control exactly how much of the element you can use. you can only use the supply that you have around you.
does this clear things up a bit?
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Post by Yoko on Sept 2, 2007 14:44:32 GMT -5
That is not what I technically meant...control can make a wide varities of things you can control but here is how i picture a justu like this one.
1. Fire and Water state. Ability to control both fire and water. 2. Lightning and Earth state. Ability to control both lightning and earth. 3. Wind, Lightning, and Earth state. Ability to control wind, lightning, and earth. 4. Nature state. Ability to control the five elements. 5. Divine state. Ability to use telekinesis.
something like that is what I am saying, but again a jutsu like that is REALLY powerful and I have roleplayed with it, and I would rather you just limit it down to the elements for the eye because the Divine state sounds like the Nara clan jutsu without the shadow
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Post by kawaiiblossom94 on Sept 10, 2007 20:51:49 GMT -5
oh...ok. i guess i could limit it to just fire and wind chakra elements. does that sound ok? and i'll also take off some of the stages, like dream state and death state. and i'll also make the natural state a little bit more complicated to obtain and such. will that make it better?
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Post by Yoko on Sept 11, 2007 13:44:22 GMT -5
You don't have to limit the abilities, but making it harder to achieve would be great really it would. But what I am getting at is having the eye able to mold the fire and wind into their own special abilities.
Like...the wind can assemble particles of things in the area and form them into something else almost perfectly. Or the wind can turn into a whirlwind that has enough power and chakra to break apart a rock...I hope that helps some.
I would really love to see this clan come into play once it is finished.
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Post by kawaiiblossom94 on Sept 11, 2007 18:40:59 GMT -5
i totally agree with you in the wind thing. so i'm guessing i'm going with that. i think that i should make it the way you said before:
1. Fire and Water state. Ability to control both fire and water. 2. Lightning and Earth state. Ability to control both lightning and earth. 3. Wind, Lightning, and Earth state. Ability to control wind, lightning, and earth. 4. Nature state. Ability to control the five elements. 5. Divine state. Ability to use telekinesis.
and then i'm guessing depending on the situations, only certain things can be activated at a certain time, that could be a flaw of the technique.
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Post by Yoko on Sept 12, 2007 14:57:54 GMT -5
exactly! that is what I was getting at. Depending on the level of the user and what not, you only get a certain amount of ability to use the specific eye. Say if young they can only maintain the eye for a few minutes and their control over the two elements is nothing phenominal. Stuff along those lines make the clan interesting and not over powered
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Post by kawaiiblossom94 on Sept 12, 2007 18:34:04 GMT -5
ok. i totally get it now! but can i make one last change....like...umm...how do you call it, make the younger ones able to manipulate only the first 3 stages? but of course, with a time limit, chakra use up, and such...
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Post by Yoko on Sept 19, 2007 18:31:11 GMT -5
of course...thats what I would want you to do...make it like sharingan where they do not even get the abilities to begin with and have to go through special training or odd methods to achieve the level of the eyes.
tell me when you are done writing it all out so i can approve it when you are done.
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Post by kawaiiblossom94 on Sept 21, 2007 19:04:12 GMT -5
ok. i was thinking that you have to obviously have some sort of ninja experience at the least, and some techniques of course. to get a nature manipulation, you must be able to do one elemental justu(ex.katon) for the others, you must be protecting somebody VERY precious to you...and have accquired(sp?) the nature states.
and this is my final change.
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